by Andrew Doerr
In his first novel, "About Grace," Anthony Doerr drags his protagonist,
David Winkler, over a fair few hot coals: 25 years of exile as a
dogsbody in a new hotel in St. Vincent in the Caribbean, a near-drowning
experience, malnutrition, a clinically debilitating journey in a
clapped-out Datsun across the vastness of America, an Alaskan winter in
an unheated shed, gradual loss of eyesight, an alienated daughter he
abandoned when she was a few months old. The comparisons with Lear are
flickering and fugitive but inevitable. As Winkler himself thinks: "I
have already been reduced. Leave me be." Why does Doerr inflict so much
on this quiet, retreating hydrologist, a man obsessed with water and
snow?
Doerr reaches heroically toward the humanization of his novel with Winkler's return to the United States and his attempts to reinscribe himself into the notion and experience of family by tracing his daughter, Grace, now a young woman with a child of 6, Christopher.
Just as his relationship with Naaliyah, a proxy daughter, set him on the path to finding his real one, this time, too, Winkler is given hope, absolution and grace by Herman Sheeler and Christopher, in two relationships combining atonement and a rewriting of the past, a relearning of responsibility.
These are definitely the most moving sections of the book, but too much brightness dazzles and distracts, and the wall of luminous prose almost fences off the reader's heart, something Doerr clearly wants to sway. A writer as dizzyingly talented and as generous as Doerr should be confident enough to do away with some of the more blinding fireworks.
Winkler is no ordinary man. He sometimes dreams of things that, in his waking
life, come true. As a boy, he dreams of a man coming out of a shop with a
hatbox who will shortly be run over by a bus. In a few days, it
happens. This life of prolepsis, with frequent illuminations of déjà vu,
of "the vertigo of future aligning with the present," becomes his
unraveling. He dreams of the woman with whom he is going to fall in love
and the exactness of the circumstances as well. Before long, he is
locked in an intense relationship with Sandy Sheeler, married to Herman
Sheeler for more than 15 years. Sandy gets pregnant, leaves her husband
and Anchorage with Winkler and sets up a new life with him in Cleveland.
A few months after their daughter, Grace, is born, Winkler dreams of an
imminent flood in which she will drown while he is trying to save her
from the rising waters.
To avoid this fate, he escapes to St. Vincent, where he is rescued by a
Chilean cook, Felix, and his wife, Soma, both exiles themselves from
Chile's political violence and repression. For 25 years, which Doerr
oddly manages to telescope so that it feels like a tenth of that time,
Winkler lives on the island in a dilapidated shed, working as general
factotum in an offshore restaurant. It is his friendship with Felix and
Soma's little girl, Naaliyah, to whom he is friend, father figure,
mentor (even academic referee when she decides to go to graduate school
in the United States), that holds out the hope of salvation for him. In
an act of redemption that allows Winkler to reorder the patterns of a
past he has been expiating, he is released from the paralytic torpor
afflicting his life. He returns to the United States to search for the
wife and daughter he had abandoned.
Doerr
traverses again the territory he had marked out in the stories of his
lucent first book, the short-story collection "The Shell Collector"
(2002): a rapture with nature expressed in prose that sings off the
page; an infinitely subtle algebra of resonance and sympathy between
minds, lives, objects, light, senses, weather; the majestic indifference
of nature; the proper measure of man against natural forces. Doerr has a
compulsion for observation and a passion for nature that borders on the
religious.
But
in "About Grace," this very strength snakes in on itself and becomes
its perilous opposite; what was pitched so perfectly in the
circumscribed space of a short story can appear overwrought, extended
now over 400 pages -- a hothouse product, at times so swooningly in love
with itself that it cannot resist yet another perfectly turned sentence
(or four) on the miracle of the hexagonal structure of snow when more
important action is pressing. Doerr's interest in nature is so obsessive
that the whole equation of man in nature becomes heavily skewed in
favor of the latter, producing fiction of rapturous beauty but of an
oddly cold, uninvolving nature, as if it were embalmed in its own
lustrous style.
A
passage about Winkler seems to hold the key both to Doerr's philosophy
and to the central weakness of the book. "All day . . . a sensitivity
had been building within him: the slightest shift in light or air
touched the backs of his eyes, reached membranes inside his nose. It was
as if, like a human divining rod, he had been attuning to vapor as it
gathered in the atmosphere, sensing it -- water rising in the xylem of
trees, leaching out of stones, even the last unfrozen volumes, gargling
deep beneath the forest in tangled, rocky aquifers -- all these waters
rising through the air, accumulating in the clouds, stretching and
binding, condensing and precipitating -- falling." This encapsulates the
whole problem of a style that can sometimes stray into the
self-consciously hypersensitive and precious as well as the problem of
balance, the way the human is compulsively stunted in favor of the
natural.
The
human action and human interests, characterization, dialogue, all
appear oddly attenuated when set within the frame of this overdeveloped
poetic realism. Faced with the occasionally thin credibility of the
characters, the exquisite avenues of light and cloud formations and ice
crystals down which Doerr leads us prove disappointingly to be
cul-de-sacs when we reach the inevitable destination.
Doerr reaches heroically toward the humanization of his novel with Winkler's return to the United States and his attempts to reinscribe himself into the notion and experience of family by tracing his daughter, Grace, now a young woman with a child of 6, Christopher.
Just as his relationship with Naaliyah, a proxy daughter, set him on the path to finding his real one, this time, too, Winkler is given hope, absolution and grace by Herman Sheeler and Christopher, in two relationships combining atonement and a rewriting of the past, a relearning of responsibility.
These are definitely the most moving sections of the book, but too much brightness dazzles and distracts, and the wall of luminous prose almost fences off the reader's heart, something Doerr clearly wants to sway. A writer as dizzyingly talented and as generous as Doerr should be confident enough to do away with some of the more blinding fireworks.
